"Oh i do like to be beside the seaside."

Last week our theme in school was 'the seaside'. We wanted to create some exciting stories, set around the seaside, to share with Year R and 1.

First, we imagined all the different things we would notice around the seaside using our senses.

Then we looked at how we can use expanded noun phrases to really excite and engage the reader.

We then used a planning grid to plan our own stories which we then used to help us write them.

Finally we read through our stories and edited them, checking for expanded noun phrases and other adventurous language. 

Why don't you have a go?